I propose that the man of the year is Aziz Yıldırım.He is the president of Fenerbahçe Sport Club.He was prisoned for some lawless court decisions.Some people who are opponent to him put forward some falsified news and unfair court put him in prison.These falsified news said that Aziz Yıldırım did match-fixing to be champion at the season of 2010-2011.Despite all these things, he was absolved and policemen who put him in prison are in prison now.Many people can dislike him but everything he has done is for his team,Fenerbahçe and there is not match-fixing among these things.Moreover,he is criticized on sending Alex from team.However,he is right for this event,too.In the meantime,Alex was legendary captain of the team.To conclude,he is the man of the year.
Hi mate! I am here to do what you most like to do : Correcting your mistakes :P. First, you are claiming someone to be the man of the year so you should use ''I propose'' or ''I claim'' instead of the verb ''think''. It would be more proper to the text content. Second, ''be right'' used with ''on'' not with ''for'' as I know, I have checked it from ozdic.com but It would be beneficial that you have a look, too. Third, you should do a little spell check because there are several mistakes such as ''Additionaly'' and you seem that you forget to put some ''the''s. That's all, have a nice semester bro <3.
YanıtlaSilThanks bro -.-
YanıtlaSilHello Oğuz, I like your idea and it is obious that you are supporting a side. However it is not the issue in question. Maybe you should be more careful about the punctuations. I believe nuances is everything about writing. Another thing about your writing is that maybe you should be a bit more clear in your supporting sentences, that is it would be better for the reader that you express your ideas more clearly. That is all I want to say. Take care.
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